It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before the date on 30 as this is best for both the individual and the society. Do you agree or disagree?
Getting married in the thirties is considered to be an excellent way to start a life ahead because it would be ideal for the person as well as for the society. This essay will discuss why I completely agree that this is a perfect age for marriage.
The main reason why age is a crucial factor is that the compatibility of individuals is much better in their late twenties. This is because, most of them are at a specific age of their life, and are in a need of a partner who understands and listens to them peacefully. As a result, it will give them sufficient time to connect with each other, which will help them to make major decisions in their life as a unit. A quintessential example of this, a recent survey that has revealed that couples, who marry at the age of 20-30 have more success rate of marriage than others. Therefore, to start a healthy and long-lasting relationship marrying a 30s is advised.
Another essential reason is that people are able to start their families having children. In other words, the fertility rate in females is much higher at this stage which leads to low complications during pregnancies. This results in never-ending joy for the grandparents as they are the ones who enjoy being around babies. To exemplify, old people, feel proud that their family name is alive and their heir is going to carry forward. Hence, having children at a certain age is not only beneficial for individuals but also long-extended families.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how marrying, in particular, is essential to the individual for having a better understanding and starting a family. In my opinion, by considering these benefits young people are advised to marry before 30.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, as for, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70508474576 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74512652182 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538983050847 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 295.0 20.2975951904 1453% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1388.0 106.682146367 1301% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 295.0 20.7667163134 1421% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 135.0 7.06120827912 1912% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203789364071 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203789364071 0.084324248473 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148921387799 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730740023581 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 148.3 13.0946893788 1133% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -219.49 50.2224549098 -437% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 117.2 11.3001002004 1037% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.52 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.43 8.58950901804 249% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 120.0 10.1190380762 1186% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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