Dear Rohan,
How are you? Hope this letter finds you well. I want to thank you for the Holiday, It was good quality time we spent after a long time. The places you have selected were amazing and economical. Even few places are so stunning that i would love to revisit again.
Unfortunately, today while checking my belongings i realise that I have forgot to collect my wallet from one of the hotels we stayed in. If i remember correctly, Laxmi palace was the last hotel we visited, and while doing payment settlement i took out my wallet and missed to collect it back. It is brown colour leather walled. It has got all my credit and debit cards along with my driving license.
I want you to go and check with hotel staff if they have found it. My cousin brother is coming to your home town next week and you can give it to him.
Take care and write back soon.
Best wishes
Devendra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...l. Even few places are so stunning that i would love to revisit again. Unfortun...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ely, today while checking my belongings i realise that I have forgot to collect m...
^
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...ing my belongings i realise that I have forgot to collect my wallet from one of the ho...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...from one of the hotels we stayed in. If i remember correctly, Laxmi palace was th...
^
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ted, and while doing payment settlement i took out my wallet and missed to collec...
^
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'missed collecting'.
Suggestion: missed collecting
...ent settlement i took out my wallet and missed to collect it back. It is brown colour leather wal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4156626506 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1644621067 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698795180723 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1181686474 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.3846153846 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7692307692 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317611162156 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104123459011 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938401828317 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171310328967 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129560747899 0.0580467560999 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.