It is often argued that few people think about being rich is gives ample chances to succor other people in hard times. I completely agree with the opinion and think being affluent always has a better chance of helping the needy.
Favoring people in their hard times is always a good deed and many people provide the best possible support from their end to the needy people but considering the affluent people they had a greater opportunity in helping the needy as they are financially more stable by which they can support the needy people in providing them any kind of financial help either by taking care of their expense. Otherwise, they can provide them better job opportunities for the needy which overall leads to a better lifestyle. Moreover, affluent people can provide access to education to poor kids who don't have access to it. Other than this they can do charity work which not over improves their lifestyle but moreover motivates them to work hard.
We all know affluent people are the pillars for any country in improving the economy, they can end up establishing any new business which leads to more job requirement and more number of jobs for the needy people end up in improving not only their lifestyle but the overall economy of the country which improves the status of the country.
To sum up, it is important that affluent people should play their part in reducing the gap between rich and poor and which leads to taking the country forward.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 585, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...de access to education to poor kids who dont have access to it. Other than this they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74901960784 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33371227768 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.692226033 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.375 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873351868027 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529718188803 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442452542806 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679456147596 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590998195111 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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