In today's world of technology, traditional cultures are being ignored day bay day, and those cannot be equalize. I entirely agree with this statement.
To begin with, the technology made our life more easier and faster. To illustrate, by the bless of technology we can communicate anywhere within few seconds with some clicks which was even out of think in bygone time. This is besause, we can contact with anyone wherever he is. Furthermore, the sector of amusement are reached in high with digitalisation. We can listen song, play video games, watch movies to refresh our mind. Consequently, we are not getting bored after our work.
On the other hand, we are losing our ancient culture and life style through using the technology too much. In the past we used to send letter to our nearest one to communicate, however, by using the email or social media, we are masseging so many unknown persons and gettign touch with them without judgeing them good or bad. Consequently, sometimes we are facing fraudulent people who are hurming us in various ways. In addition to this, juveniles are using too much mobile phone or computer and getting an unsocialistic mind. For example, one of my cousins use too much computer and internet technology, that is why he is unlikely to contact face to face with anyone. Therefore, his family is concern about him and his future.
To adress this problems, we should enhence our live communication with people and play some traditional games so that our next genration also so this. Furthermore, the communication skill should also be increased with letter communication, and live conduct.
In conclusion, in this ear of tehcnology, we should prectice some traditional thing that will help us to remember our traditional cultures and respect to it, and usage of technology should also be lesses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...egin with, the technology made our life more easier and faster. To illustrate, by the bless...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...re easier and faster. To illustrate, by the bless of technology we can communicate anywhe...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'evened'.
Suggestion: evened
... few seconds with some clicks which was even out of think in bygone time. This is be...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...metimes we are facing fraudulent people who are hurming us in various ways. In addition...
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Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... about him and his future. To adress this problems, we should enhence our live co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02614379085 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81433840576 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2874780619 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4705882353 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21400506693 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710929874994 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700322721519 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150140931206 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770877992894 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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