The only way to improve the safety on out roads is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders.To what extend do you agree or disagree.
In these days the accidents are increasing day by day because of rough driving by humans.Masses reckon that the only solid to reduce this problem is to take strict action against driving offenders. I am completely disagree with this opinion.
To embark with, firstly the irresponsible behavior of traffic police is the major reason of safety problems.Some of the officers are not very conscious to their job. If anyone is caught while crossing the traffic rules such as overspeed and crossing traffic lights they take money from them as bribery and leave them.Furthermore,the conjusted area such as temples and markets are the another situation of happening accidents.Some of the mankinds are drive roughly in the conjusted areas too. They do not care if anyone crossing road and walk on that way. So the government should expand the parking space on gathering areas such as historical temples, sale markets and other.
Moreover, the lack of traffic rules are also play a major role of safety problems of roads. For instance, the schools which are located on highway roads and urban cities there are not any precaution signs are available in front of schools. The school principal should locate the signs such as “DRIVE SLOW SCHOOL AHEAD” and many other. It might prevent the accidents.Apart from this, the maintainence of roads is also major issue of mishappening on roads. The roads condition are very critical there are lot of water logging after rainfall which occur many accidents like slipping of bikes.
To conclude, government should improve the facilities and rules on the roads and people also have to obey the orders and rules of government which they provide.The co-operation pf public is also very essential to reduce the accidents and safety problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, apart from, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11379310345 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80300713329 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558620689655 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.0336777001 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.583333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138571189174 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502332080389 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369453476576 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784259029183 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101517936082 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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