The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The provided graph illustrates the proportion of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean island from the year 2010 until 2017.
Overall, visitors staying on cruise ship are gradually increasing throughout the period, while tourists who are staying on island experienced some fluctuations during these years and it declined in the end of period to be lower than people who stay on cruise ship.
First of all, visitors on cruise ship started about 250,000 in 2010 and rose to half million in the year 2011. Although It has been declined in 2012 to around 250,000 tourists, it surged significantly over the period until it reached to 2 million of visitors in 2017.
On the other hand, visitors staying in island were much higher than on cruise ship as it begins with 1.5 million visitor in 2010 and continue with the same range until 2011, then it gradually increased until it get stabled in the number of tourists as it hit 1.5 million in 2013 and remained stabled with the same stage until 2015, however it decreased to approximately 1.25 million in 2016 it goes back to 1.5 in the year 2017.
In total, visitors began with 1 million and the island shows a significant majority of tourists during 8 years until it hit 3.5 million in the end of the period 2017.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 332, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... stabled with the same stage until 2015, however it decreased to approximately 1....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, while, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77727272727 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49344181126 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.255259386 43.030603864 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.166666667 112.824112599 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6666666667 22.9334400587 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 5.23603664747 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192427951591 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123809714602 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118688031081 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1431574891 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121264270974 0.0819641961636 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.32 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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