drug usage
In the contemporary era, narcotics are proven to be lifesavers in bountiful cases. Although they are extremely beneficial, the present day's teenagers are willing to misuse them for personal pleasure. this essay briefly explains the causes and effects of the situation and in furtherance suggests certain endeavors to counteract youth drug abuse.
To embark on, the major reason for the intake of these malicious chemicals is mental pressure developing due to educational or emotional consequences. As a result, young people are being attracted by peddlers in order to relieve stress. For example, it is known that 80% of addicts claim that they have been used to it to relax from the strain. Thus many of us are succumbing to different pressures.
As we dive in, there are some gnarly influences due to this dangerous trend. The primary being, the increase in the fatality rate of the youth. Moreover, this is an illegal business because of which only the criminals are growing financially stronger. In this way, the usage of illegal chemicals accounts for some of the humongous losses.
Moving on towards the solutions to this issue, the amateurs must be oriented and motivated to develop a sound mindset. The government must not only pass strict statutes regarding the control of narcotics but also raise awareness in the public regarding the disadvantages that follow. Hence, these pursuits can constitute the curbing of drug usage among civilians.
In conclusion, drug intake is a serious situation and can pose various real-time threats to the progress of individuals and nations. However possible remedial measures are available to overshadow this inappropriate culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32584269663 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84039867051 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8767079487 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156134308453 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430938553653 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883370074291 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742519414845 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499330204395 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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