Environmental issues like climate alteration and contamination have been increasing at an alarming rate. The governing bodies started remedial measures but nonetheless aren't commendable. Extensive damage that has already been done is one of the reasons for the former outcoming. Overcoming this can only be possible by solutions like raising awareness. This essay will put forth the reasons and in furtherance suggests solutions to tackle this situation.
Firstly, let us comprehend the causes of why the governments' pursuits around the globe regarding this issue weren't optimum. The major reason is the fact that it is only possible when all of us collaborate to enhance the echo system. Even though the government seeks redemption it is impossible until every individual is indulging in the task. Secondly, most of the population is unable to foresee the forthcoming devastating events which are the result of malicious human endeavors. Because of this, despite trying hard the authorities were unable to succeed.
Now we will hurtle towards the remedies to successfully improvise the ecological conditions around us. Awareness campaigns should be conducted at a humongous scale and people are to be educated regarding the aftermath events of environmental disruption. Thus a large degree of the public will take part in accomplishing this. Also, irrefutable statutes regarding anti-environmental activities like deforestation and natural resource contamination should be enforced. This can mostly hinder ecological damage. By following these methods we can curb climate changes and pollution.
Lack of awareness and rules which aren't strict enough were reasons for environmental mishaps. Hence, it is eventually concluded that by conducting campaigns and enforcing serious admonitions can save ecology from extinction.
- The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makes comparisons where relevant 11
- Nowadays children play less with others and this has an impact on their development What are reasons for this Does it have a good or bad effect on children 73
- Nowadays people are spending more time in workplace and staying away from home for work Discuss its advantages and disadvantages with your own experiences 71
- Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience 61
- Animals are killed and consumed for human needs Some people consider this as cruel However others consider this as mandatory Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77121771218 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1503234857 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653136531365 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1809080806 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.8888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0555555556 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242552764249 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684429123626 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536717383044 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131033482811 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757729133258 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.59 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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