Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should write at least 250 words.
Today globalization is changing the world, and traveling has become cheaper than before. As its direct result, tourism industries are growing rapidly in many countries which has both positive and negative aspects; however, both sides will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the tourism industry has benefited not just the travelers but also many other sectors like hotels, restaurants, travel and tour companies, and so on. For instance, huge tourism activity around Sydney Opera house has benefited thousands of local businesses. Moreover, such a trend is very likely to promote employment opportunities. In Nepal, for instance, the tourism industry has covered a significant portion of total employment. This trend is extremely crucial as it promotes the overall development of the country.
The same industry, on the other hand, has some drawbacks. Firstly, growth in tourism means an increase in the number of activities, and more activity means more pollution. To illustrate, there are piles of junk food plastics, and bottles floating over Sydney harbor because of high tourist activities. Another worrying point to note is, some of the natural heritage and resources are deteriorating as a result of such activity. Tourists love to visit such places resulting in more locals shifting there to promote their business. Hence, natural resources are in chaos.
In conclusion, I think the advantages of tourism activity outweigh the disadvantages because it promotes employment to the locals and the growth of other related sectors. Although, it could lead to pollution and deterioration of natural resources, controlling activities like strong rules and emphasizing cleaning activities can help minimize the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59022556391 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93024072417 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627819548872 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3312781479 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0103162097337 0.244688304435 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00265354986773 0.084324248473 3% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0067697938037 0.0667982634062 10% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00669959268447 0.151304729494 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00701621612536 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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