In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
There are a number of people around the world, who would prefer to purchase a real-estate property rather than renting it. In this essay, I will consider the reasons that are lying behind it and whether it is good or bad.
The main reason that people believe that owning a home is better than renting it is that property is an asset and theoretically can be a source of income. Meanwhile, renting an apartment or house is always a source of monthly expenses. In addition, as a rule, any kind of renovations are not allowed by a property owner. For instance, if somebody would like to change something in the house, they had to ask official permission from the owners. Another reason why the general public wishes to owe real-estate property is that a renter can increase monthly rent on short notice and nothing can be done about it.
In my opinion, the desire to be an owner of their home has as positive consequences as negative ones and it depends on a personal situation. First, I think that if a person does not have enough funds to buy a home and has to loan money from a bank then it is a disadvantageous situation because the person becomes tied hand and foot by mortgage payments for years. On the other hand, if there is financial stability and extra money, buying a property might be a great investment due to the fact that prices on a real-estate are gradually increasing, and lending an apartment or a house can bring monthly income to their owner.
In conclusion, the public might consider owning a property, as one of the essential goals because having your own accommodation is more comfortable and can be a good investment. Meanwhile, I believe that in some cases it can have some drawbacks such as enormous debts that would not be paid off for years. Thus, the idea to purchase property might be as good as bad depending on the personal circumstances of a person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...from the owners. Another reason why the general public wishes to owe real-estate property is t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, thus, while, as to, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61721068249 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72166845035 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519287833828 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8566845839 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.692307692 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251033526702 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806135159112 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495770799686 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140126292266 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173139710623 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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