Some people believe that successful sports team are always those with strong & fit players. Others think that success depends on the team's mental strength. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
A set of people always believes that physical fitness and strengths are the key points to wining performance and others opine that the victories are associated with the intelligence level. In my opinion, both physical fitness and mental heath are important in the sports. This essay will elaborate both the views and render my opinion.
To begin with, sports like football or basketball require tremendous amount of stamina and endurance. The muscular team standing in front of creates a fear on the opponent team and this winds half the game. Additionally, the players' toughness enables them to stand like a strong wall on the battlefield for the entire duration of the match. For example, I have always been impressed with the sturdy physiques of the 6 feet NBA players. Similarly, Solo games like running if played in form of relays,taller and stronger players have advantageous benefits. Thus, Physical fitness plays a vital role in the sports.
Nonetheless, mental abilities have significant importance in sports. Nowadays, all the sportsmen have started taking mental strength development training along with the diet programs and workouts in the gym. For an instance, during an exciting cricket match, coordination between and a batsman and the runner is the most important factor and it can happen only with concentration which requires great focus. Likewise, the fielding team requires synchronization in order to to make attempt to get them out. Decision of changing baller is taken under pressure and requires a great decision making skill, where better intelligence quotient is necessary.Imagine a situation where one run required of one ball and all the burden is on the brain of the batsman than his strength.
To conclude, the sports persons are unique than the commoners and they are always trained hard physically and mentally to achieve great success.
- Some people believe that successful sports teams are always those with the strongest or fittest players Others think that success depends more on the team s mental strength Discuss both views and give your own opinion 65
- Some people believe that successful sports team are always those with strong fit players Others think that success depends on the team s mental strength Discuss both the views and give your opinion 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, nonetheless, similarly, so, thus, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26333333333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8577594176 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7886487857 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.266666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253243536045 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752605408967 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494315160354 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14742070377 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610030705687 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.