many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle both school and parents are responsible for solving this problem.
do you agree or disagree
today generation are following unhealthy lifestyle which sperate wide range of disease in human. This problem can be solved by school authorities and parents if they show attention on diet. I totally agree with this problem. This essay will discuss the how school and parents may be changed eating habbit of children.
On the one hand, school authority should have responsibilty toward student for their changing diet and make healthy diet chart to every age group student as well as strict action should be taken if children does not implify such as penelitie fees. Secondly, Doing physcial exercise should be make compulsary in education institution. In fact, school oragination should add extra classess for exercise and yoga. Eventually, they understand the importance of healty diet and eat more nutrition food for making perfect body.
On the other hand, Parents are the first teacher of the infant and they follow the parent footprint if families eat nutrition food on diet. As a result they definitilly like to eat this food rather than junk food which responsible for obesity problem in young generation. For example, latest survey showed thar 50 percent of children has faced obesity problem in UK. Therefore, healthy lifestyle should make a part of children's lifestyle.
In conclusion, both party can play major role in changing kids lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20547945205 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59086452182 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639269406393 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8127687243 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6923076923 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263221351865 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942630468128 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516892712158 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145598593272 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891839989487 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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