Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
An increasing concern for many people around the world is a number of offenders become involved a crime after releasing from prison. While there are many factors which lead to this, there are also a range of solution so as to overcome with this issue. This essay will discuss why offenders have a tendency to break the law and provide some potential solution to this issue.
From an overall perspective, there are two main reasons why ex-convicts to get into trouble after they have been sentenced. First and foremost, people with a criminal record are likely not conceded by society. Criminal record is a huge factor to take into account before hiring any employee due to the fact that nobody makes an ex-criminal worked in their company because of they may have a tendency to turn to crime. Perhaps another reason is that they might not be admitted by their friends and families as well in order to even communicate. It is well-known fact that despite some of family members will continue to talk as in old days, some of them, probably, will not speak as usual. The result of this that, the feelings of breaking the law is occurring again, which in turns leads to commit an offence.
There are a variety of viable solutions at hand to address this problem. The primary solution would be is that training programmers in prison can help offenders develop new skills so as to get new job. Some of paid employment do not demand on criminal records such as web developer and online educator, which can be worked from remote. Secondly, rehabilitation programmers should tackle the social exclusion of offenders and their families. Albeit being a lawbreaker, some people can be rehabilitated to join society with ease.
In conclusion, re-offenders it must be said that (X) has become a complex issue with no easy solutions. If the authorities choose to ignore this issue, re-offenders more likely to become involved in delinquency and the world will be unbearable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: because they
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uency and the world will be unbearable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8776119403 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65867779351 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570149253731 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8333260591 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332603685644 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930788027767 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445283979776 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174850757022 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454376559491 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.