Most of the parents across the globe believes that a child should be taught about the importance of the money. It is very crucial topic, as money is one thing needed for the survival of an individual. In order to make children understand its importance a practical approach towards money saving and its wise use can be helpful.
To have a quality life, money is the most essential thing. Without money, human survival is not possible and even earning a decent amount of money requires a lot of efforts. Even though it is difficult for children to understand monetary issues at such a young age, making them aware about its importance can help them to grow into an adjusting individual. As children are the future of the country, they need to have a knowledge of spending their money in a right way. So, its parents responsibility to teach their children the difference between their necessity items and materialistic items, so when they grow up they do not end up spending their hard earn money into something non useful.
There are many ways to help children learn about the importance of money. First, pocket money provided by the parents o their offspring should be limited. Giving them more than requires amount can sometimes be detrimental. As, when a child have extra money, they can end up spending it to buy candy or a junk food that is harmful for their health. Second, parents should give tasks to their child and let them earn their own money from them. For example, many people asks their children to help them with gardening, laundry or other household stuffs and in return reward them with some money price. This way they can understand the importance of earning and wise spending.
In conclusion, children are the future generation of the world, so it is important to instill them with the some responsibilities of being an adult. Teaching them the importance of money, like how well it should be spent and how you can earn can help a child to grow up into better individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ave a knowledge of spending their money in a right way. So, its parents responsibility to teac...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...t is important to instill them with the some responsibilities of being an adult. Tea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74712643678 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56370800952 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488505747126 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8656870705 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1764705882 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339439523339 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133052520954 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941349702966 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230262153419 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331653871935 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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