Some people argue that individuals’ freedom should be in accordance with laws and rules, otherwise, society cannot function as it should be. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different views in regard to whether human freedom should be limited in the boundaries of laws and rules. Personally, I support such operation in order to ensure mental and physical life of human.
On the one hand, human mental life can be protected through legal system and morality. First of all, without regulations which are maintained by the government, citizens would live in fear every day with stories and rumors of perverted murderers, especially those consider killing people as their hobbies or artworks. In other words, if authority let individuals’ freedom expand to serious crime, this would cause crisis as well as inhibit freedom among citizens. Secondly, if morality is considered standard, respecting and living in harmony with other people are necessary, especially in the relationship with family members as well as relatives. Only by gaining good relationship with beloved people can individuals have the happiness in their lives.
On the other hand, the law and moral systems have been performing deep influences to human physical life, especially in financial situations. In terms of law system, only by completely removing economic crime can individual be freely to take part in the business as well as other types of activities related to economy and finance. To be more specific, a financial environment with fairness and transparency is an essential factor to improve individuals’ financial situations in particular and develop national economy in general. In regard to moral system, it is said that businessmen attach great importance to trust, which means that individuals’ words are consistent with their behaviors in order to create the belief to the others. Thanks to trust, businessmen can have long-term corporation and achieve more success in the future.
In conclusion, based on the points above, I completely agree that freedom should not be the reason to against laws and rules, but support mutually for a better life among human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in general, in particular, as well as, first of all, in other words, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34603174603 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87993379169 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6474975594 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.538461538 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210857167989 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756803257191 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618753216628 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142190340238 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277442690612 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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