It is difficult for people in cities to do physical exercise. Why is this the case?
How can we solve this problem?
It is a fact that people living in cities face challenges to do Physical activities. There are several reasons for such a situation and also few visible influences too. Both aspects are explained in the ensuing paragraphs.
Discussing the reasons, the most common one is people working in cities don’t have much free time to concentrate on doing some physical activities. This is because of taking a long traveling time to reach the office and need to complete the targets in a tight schedule. The other cause is the place where the people staying don’t have enough facilities in terms of playing grounds, parks, free space and so on. Furthermore, due to apartment culture, the buildings are next to next so it's difficult to get fresh air, and even there is no space for a walking or jogging track.
The mentioned causes have some impacts too. The foremost effect is seen on people is getting sick frequently, getting several serious diseases at an early age. According to my in the apartments, the management needs to provide facilities such as swimming pool, courts to play badminton or tennis and Gym as well. The municipality services need to provide a park that facilitates around 20,000sq meters distance. Companies management at the workplace needs to think and provide the gym facilities and conduct some physical strain related workshops to explain the benefits of exercise.
Thus, to conclude the topic, it can be finally commented that the individuals who are staying in cities are struggling to do health-related activities and has bad effects on their health. So, we should recommend to the government or local community to provide the required facilities for the people to live healthy and long-life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...people living in cities face challenges to do Physical activities. There are several ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05166051661 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74095980701 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575645756458 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0044476794 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183741686349 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057325007974 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051966598454 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112430401825 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420088146138 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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