Youngsters these days prefer to have a boyfriend or girlfriend. Some people think that getting into a relationship at young age is not good idea. Do you agree or disagree?
In these days, teenagers would like to choose the the boyfriends or girlfriends. Many others argue that getting into inter-relation at an early age is not a good idea. I totally agree with this statement, because it can definitely create many issues in both of their lives.
The most massive reason why teenagers should not get involved in a interrelation is that it could impact on their careers. While they are in relationship quarrels and misunderstandings are very bound to happen and this lead the way to increase their stress levels and aggression. As a result they would not be able to concentrate on their studies or their employment. This means they are spoiling their lives by their own Hands by taking wrong decisions in right time.
One more Immense reason for not supporting to getting into a relationship at an early age is that they are unmature to understand about each other and also risk of undesirable pregnancy. This is because youngsters do not care much and mistakes can happen during intimate moments this could be extremely dangerous when it comes to known in their families they are humilating their families reputation and fame.
At the end I substantially oppose that teenage relationships should be avoided because it will affect them in their career paths, beautiful lives and put them under enormous pressure and increase their stress levels.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...se days, teenagers would like to choose the the boyfriends or girlfriends. Many others ...
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Line 4, column 66, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06113537118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84377058494 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602620087336 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1401956268 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132133504161 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596599877205 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642893646459 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911486316439 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660437173502 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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