A friend of you recently gave you a nice birthday present….
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
thank her for present and say her why you particularly like it
describe some other present you received
explain some of the things you did on your birthday
Dear Nimisha
I am very grateful to being part of my 30th birthday celebration it was quit special moment of my life, and also very thankful to give me such a wonderful set of the new addition of 2020 video game box as a present which is very close to my heart, I like it especially this one more from other presents because I have played almost all version of that game and it quite entertaining and enjoyable. looking forward to playing this one.
I would like to share with you that I got some other beautiful present from my family, friends and business colleague. such as amazing glasses, clothes, shoes, pen, books, electronic device, set of six-bottle wine, as well as holiday ticket from my father.
Furthermore, on the morning of my birthday, I and my wife went to my grandparent home to get their blessing, in the evening I and my wife cut cake and dance together. It was an amazing memory of life will remember forever.
Yours friendly,
Harry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...new addition of 2020 video game box as a present which is very close to my heart,...
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...amily, friends and business colleague. such as amazing glasses, clothes, shoes, pen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59302325581 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56645055854 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668604651163 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.92822149 44.8134815571 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.857142857 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132055179812 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655933943802 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907343516899 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786632007905 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616070728565 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.