Write a letter to a friend who you have met on an overseas trip in an English speaking country. Ask for him to send you the trips photographs.
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I can never forget the wonderful moments we spent together during the recent vacation in Canada. I am writing this letter to request you to send photographs of that tour.
The best part of the trip was that we met there accidentally and later on had a wonderful vacation together. We clicked a lot of photographs with your brand new Canon power shot camera throughout the trip. I was hoping that you would send me the photographs, as this help to reminisce the entire trip. But, I understand that once we get back to the routine hectic schedules of life, some things slip out of mind.
I shall be waiting eagerly for the pictures. I especially liked the one in which we both have posed in front of the Niagra falls. Please send them as an email attachment. I shall get them printed from here. Alternatively, you can upload them in Google drive and can share with me, so I can get them from there.
Please plan your next holiday for India, there is a lot to see and do here. I shall show you around and you will also have a chance to meet my parents. I have talked a lot about you to them.
Waiting eagerly for your reply!
Yours fondly,
RK
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35652173913 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35528605497 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3813877428 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.625 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 4.34317383033 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256531916903 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803733452536 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691635652261 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125785361759 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485095240096 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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