The reading and listening are about the cons. and pros. of the use of avocados.The writer believes that avocados contain beneficial properties which is good for our health.The speaker in the listening section disagrees.He claims that there are many issues with the use of avocados and challenges each of the writer's point.
First the article posits that avocados contain viral nutrients, minerals and 20 kinds of vitamins which are good for controlling blood pressure as it is rich in phytonutrients and folic acid. However the professor point out it also loaded with 29 gram of fats which is nearly equal to 300 calories and this extra fat increases blood pressure instead of reducing.
Also the author notes that avocados is good for pregnancy as it reduce miscarriage chances for women. The lecture rebuts this arguments.He says that intake of avocados reduce milk production in women and effect baby stomach and brain.
Lastly, the author believes that avocados give benefits of meat which can save a lot of money because both nearly have same taste. But the professor argues that growing an avocados is costly as it require more water. So it also effect the natural resources which is bad for our environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... point. First the article posits that avocados contain viral nutrients, minera...
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... rich in phytonutrients and folic acid. However the professor point out it also loaded ...
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...fessor point out it also loaded with 29 gram of fats which is nearly equal to 300 ca...
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...omen. The lecture rebuts this arguments.He says that intake of avocados reduce mil...
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... of money because both nearly have same taste. But the professor argues that growing ...
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...e. But the professor argues that growing an avocados is costly as it require more...
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...ly as it require more water. So it also effect the natural resources which is bad for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, lastly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 202.0 270.72406181 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06930693069 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58326679356 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59900990099 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3684103788 49.2860985944 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.777777778 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06452816374 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18376849535 0.272083759551 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643781213181 0.0996497079465 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595253416221 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111583338142 0.162205337803 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458260888163 0.0443174109184 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.