Cities are now over crowded with the growing population. This has led to a shortage in the availability of houses for the people trying to settle in these big cities. Many thinks that this problem can be mitigated by the government. I agree with this statement as government can provide the land for good housing schemes with low budget.
As the big cities are burgeoning with people from other smaller areas, this situation has caused a deficit in the available houses. With limited infrastructure in the city area, people are finding it difficult to find an accommodation for them. Apart from the availability, another factor is the price, as the cost of living in a developed area is high, the housing prices are quiet reflective, making difficult for the new comers to settle there. A survey conducted by housing board stated that majority of people are unable to to their dream due to affordability issues.
Also, these cities are housed with number of old individual constructed home that accommodates single family. So in order to accommodate number of people, building high rise building is more sensible.To make housing more affordable and available, government can help to provide the land for new vertical construction that can accommodate number of families. For instance, government can offer bidding to the private companies to build a tall building with a low budget.This can be done by eliminating unnecessary amenities.
In conclusion, making house available to the people in a large city is a big task, due to increase in the size of population. However it can be achieved by building sky scrapers instead of individual house, so that large number of families can be provided with the housing facilities. Also, government can control the pricing for these houses to make it more affordable for low income people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...people are finding it difficult to find an accommodation for them. Apart from the availability, ...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ated that majority of people are unable to to their dream due to affordability issues...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...ing high rise building is more sensible.To make housing more affordable and availa...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...build a tall building with a low budget.This can be done by eliminating unnecessary ...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... to increase in the size of population. However it can be achieved by building sky scra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07260726073 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87912136338 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511551155116 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5897024448 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.785714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256232877872 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104369940719 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053229026194 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178729598849 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622164489773 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.