Many governments think that economic progress is most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress and equally important for a country.
Advancing in economic zone is prioritized by most of the governments since it is deemed as an essential issue to be looked after. Conversely, others critique the former viewpoint as they agree, in addition to evolve in economical features other improvements in various fields supposed to be considered on the account of the fact that they are as vital as economic in our life. I would support the latter view relying on some potent causes besides a valid instance.
To commence with, I would put a light on first ideology which is genuinely believed by a host number of governmental organizations. Economic issues are frequently given more importance by governments since it is remarkably imperative subject to pick up on. To be more precise, every government wants to make sure that residents are experiencing welfare, safety and peace and all these positive situations are in hand of a standard, progressive economical condition.Moreover,It is needless to mention the strong link between the level of satisfaction and people's financial status. Owing to this truism, government make efforts to provide sufficient career vacancies, affordable primary needs as well as supported retired people. Obviously, all these mentioned privileges come with a healthy economic system, therefore, governments almost always are alert besides attentive toward economic advancement and they never categorize it as a secondary aim to fulfil.
Despite the fact that economic plays a crucial role in every individual life, it is highly supported by some that every nation are in need of a significant development in other fields rather than merely economic. To highlight some of these significant field I would mention Educational system, medicine domain as well as Teaching industry. I am of the opinion that every government ought to have a focused plan to progress in these fields since, they are as essential for humans' survival as economic. Taken for instance some rich besides privileged nations which are in a shortage of well-educated individuals as they have been allocating most of their countries budget on business industry. Consequently, they ought to employ other people from different nationalities to work in their hospitals or universities as knowledgeable experts...
By way of a conclusion, while economic is a key marker of every countries to progress, I side with people who believes there are also other remarkable issues such as medicine or teaching that can be considered as crucial as economic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ndard, progressive economical condition.Moreover,It is needless to mention the strong li...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , It
...rogressive economical condition.Moreover,It is needless to mention the strong link ...
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Line 8, column 120, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...ogress, I side with people who believes there are also other remarkable issues such as medicine or t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, conversely, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34848484848 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13920072075 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558080808081 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6101966117 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.285714286 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219547705655 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704678160705 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382847756639 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131391476791 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00910251420451 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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