Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.
It is irrefutable to say that cultural tradition is heart of the country. Some individuls believe that these may be destroyed if they are modified from money to attract tourists. While others think that to alive these cultural traditions then money is the only path. In this essay, I shall discuss both the view and give my opinion. I, personally side with the latter view.
To begin with, On one hand, When the cultural tradition is used as a money-making attractions then people will not understand the value of the original cultural tradition. It makes cultural traditions disappear altogether. Another point i woul like to say that, When money turns to the main purpose, local residents may adjust these traditions to fit tourists taste for making much more money.
However, On the other hand, To save traditions people have to accept the change. we have to make these cultural traditions alluring for tourists, because we need tourists. The country's economy will rapidly growing if we keep alive our traditions. Moreover, Local people also having a benifit because they have a chance to earn money and from this also unemployement ratio will decrease by time.
Moving further, we get a chance to spread ouur culture in all over the globe. If our artists and artisans do not earn money from their art, which depicts our culture and tradition, then this art will die off. It's quite cool that we should keep alive culture in modern style. In this way, the old custom will be replaced by the modern-style custom, losing the original meaning of itself.
To conclude, to save cultural traditions we need to make some changes to make them captivating to the tourist of today. There is no harm in using culture to promote tourism. It not only enhances the reputation of the country but also provides a livelihood to local artists.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...odified from money to attract tourists. While others think that to alive these cultur...
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Suggestion: We
...tions people have to accept the change. we have to make these cultural traditions ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'grow'
Suggestion: grow
...ists. The countrys economy will rapidly growing if we keep alive our traditions. Moreov...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... depicts our culture and tradition, then this art will die off. Its quite cool th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87179487179 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54863927031 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3510708424 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426335859535 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124343215024 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925900766622 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238105171673 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131953763045 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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