Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is irrefuitable that most of the cultural traditions lure tourists from all over the world. It is used now a days as a money making policy by lured visitors. Some people believe that this money generating aim can ruin the cultural tradition wheras other group of people assume this policy as a way to save these traditions. While there are some negative effects of making these traditions as a tourist attraction, i personally side with the latter view.
Cultural tradition is the most essential element for the local people. Cultural tradition can not be keep authentic as diverse people and culture collaborate with the tradition and day by day different culture mix with this. So, without taking proper steps to keep the tradition, it is quite impossible to keep it pure. One way to keep it authentic, is to make this cultural tradition as money making attraction goal at tourists. Cultural tradition lure the tourists as it contain many historical and traditional values. Bu making tourist attraction, authority can provide more emphasis to keep alive the tradition. On the other hand, it can create a positive impact on economy. For example, most of the tourists love rajasthan's cultural tradition. Every year, million of visitors visit rajasthan to enjoy their traditions and this is the main reason that have been kept this tradition pure for thousands of year ago.
However, sometimes if huge tourists interact with this tradition then it is more likely diverse traditions could be mixed that can make this tradition as a hybrid. For instance, india has a pure cultural tradition. But as diverse people from different area now visit and live there, most of the areas of india now has hybrid culture.
So this can ruin the cultural tradition.
In conclusion, it is obvious that there are possibility that making attraction of cultural tradition can ruin the tradition. But now technology, media can also influence the tradition. So, if it can place for tourist attraction, then the authority will emphasize to keep this tradition alive and also effect positively on economy.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-07-10 | Zahid6400 | 67 | view |
| 2023-02-24 | hongngocvo | 84 | view |
| 2022-08-30 | Lê Khánh Diệp | 73 | view |
| 2022-06-05 | cynnie.chan | 61 | view |
| 2021-06-11 | kmphuc041104 | 56 | view |
- The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The graph shows the spending on research into renewable energy in four countries between 1975 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The graphs below show the different reasons of two groups of students to choose Dorrifod University Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The picture below shows the use of renewable energy accounting for the total energy from 1971 to 2006 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment What can governments do to address these problems What can individual people do 61
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...sts from all over the world. It is used now a days as a money making policy by lured visit...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a (days)' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a (days); days
...from all over the world. It is used now a days as a money making policy by lured visit...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 418, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ese traditions as a tourist attraction, i personally side with the latter view. ...
^
Line 8, column 35, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are possibilities'?
Suggestion: there are possibilities
...n. In conclusion, it is obvious that there are possibility that making attraction of cultural trad...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07246376812 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70407597621 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469565217391 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8791612249 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306960207486 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109347408308 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835308695118 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180803876394 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113179348791 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...sts from all over the world. It is used now a days as a money making policy by lured visit...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a (days)' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a (days); days
...from all over the world. It is used now a days as a money making policy by lured visit...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 418, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ese traditions as a tourist attraction, i personally side with the latter view. ...
^
Line 8, column 35, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are possibilities'?
Suggestion: there are possibilities
...n. In conclusion, it is obvious that there are possibility that making attraction of cultural trad...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07246376812 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70407597621 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469565217391 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8791612249 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306960207486 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109347408308 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835308695118 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180803876394 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113179348791 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.