society is based on laws and rules. It could not function if individuals are free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
According to the statement, if individuals are free and they do everything according to their own wishes then the rules and laws could not function because society is based on them. I completely agree with the statement and will elaborate the reasons in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there is a significant importance of rules and laws to maintain the society in a right way. SAs, if the individuals do not follow them and do everything which they want to do, then this would lead to plethora of difficulties. First of all, the major problem will become increase in crime rates. Because, if the masses do not learn and follow the rules, then this came become disastrous for the society. For instance, in today's time crime rates such as rape cases grow rapidly even after making laws for the protection of women. And in this case if individuals become free from these laws then this crime rates would increases significantly and will go at peak level. Due to this, many victims will lose their lives and will create a huge disturbance in the society also.
In addition, if masses do not follow laws and regulations in a right way then this will also show a negative impact on their own lives. For instance, today's modern generation does not care about the traffic rules and signals while driving. And in some cases, this leads to accidents, in which they lose their lives also and someone loses their body parts such as legs, hands and so on. As a result, this becomes disastrous moment for them-self and their parents.
Although, there is necessary for the people of society to follow all rules and laws but, in this criteria, government also plays a vital role because if they made any rules then they should pass in strict manner, as if a person does not follow them, then they should pay penalty for strictly.
To conclude, according my opinion, individuals play a vital role in society and if they do not follow rules and regulations then this can causes numerous problems such as accident, crimes and so on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... rules and laws to maintain the society in a right way. SAs, if the individuals do not follow ...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
... these laws then this crime rates would increases significantly and will go at peak level...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...reate a huge disturbance in the society also. In addition, if masses do not follow ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...sses do not follow laws and regulations in a right way then this will also show a negative imp...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ty to follow all rules and laws but, in this criteria, government also plays a vital...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...low rules and regulations then this can causes numerous problems such as accident, cri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71267605634 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46548883417 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49014084507 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2250454638 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270285744761 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998510423317 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109675496824 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177502350586 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850462038833 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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