You are starting a new business and need to build a website. You have a friend who works for an IT company who you want to help you. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
* describe your new business
* ask your friend to help you build the website
* say how you will thank your friend for his/her help
Hello Joe,
I hope you’re doing good! Last time, when we met in that local restaurant I still remember his barbeque dip. I’m just writing to ask for some help with my current business idea.
As you know, I have been doing a lot of research for an online home-made chocolate store. Recently, I’ve seen a survey being carried out by Stanley that shows the increasing craze in people for dark chocolates and cakes. Because opening a physical cafe and start selling such things become expensive, I thought to launch an online cafe.
Definitely, this’ll need a website which could hold all types of dishes being made using different essence of the chocolates. If you can help me build one, I can prepare to make it public as soon as possible. You can share the details about how we can shape this idea.
Once the things will be completed, what do you think about going to Nainital? I do have some coupons for the stays that you can redeem on your trip. I’ll be really thankful for this help and let me know if I can be of any help to you.
See you soon, Goodbye till then!
With Love,
Apoorva
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, still, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56218905473 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24975762496 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696517412935 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0430999606 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4166666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291171546353 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105368648847 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555681385944 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154425284698 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474387685531 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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