You drive to work, but have recently had a problem parking your car at the office.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
* describe the problem with the parking
* explain how this is affecting you
* suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Mr. Richard,
I am writing to bring to your notice regarding the parking crisis which we have been facing since November.
Last month, when my working timings were changed from morning to afternoon, I started facing problem with my car park as it gets filled by the time I reach. So, I need to take my vehicle to the nearest metro station that is quite a chaos for me.
Despite these difficulties, I have been paying double charges for the same wherein it takes me extra time to reach the office. Because of this inconvenience, I tried to use public transportation that It is hectic during this shift hours.
I would really appreciate it if you could grant me some work from home days per week. This will help me to compensate for the commute time that is non-productive this month. Also, parking lot space can be made rotational for further weeks.
I hope you will take immediate action on this matter, and consider my request.
Yours sincerely,
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ek. This will help me to compensate for the commute time that is non-productive this month....
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Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n be made rotational for further weeks. I hope you will take immediate action on...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5638590062 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.719298245614 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5237229436 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188960242833 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670844595836 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432443830049 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894030041561 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355522626316 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.