In recent years, technological developments changed human life unpredictably. Thanks to these achievements, life quality is much higher in terms of safety, wealth, and health compared to past decades. By contrast, the happiness level has decreased noticeably. The examination of this inclination and possible acts needed to be taken to tackle the detrimental effects of this trend are examined in this essay.
Firstly, modern society is extremely complex and fast than previous years, it always requires studying, working, and development. Correspondingly, today’s life is stressful due to constant need and pressure to do something. Another contributing factor is the existence of terrible events in the world. Surely, they have always been somewhere from starting of the eternity, but awareness increased in recent years because of communication technologies and the internet. It is understandable that being conscious of natural disasters, crimes, wars decreases the mood of people and hope for better tomorrows.
Firstly, to address its rood causes governments should start from focusing on decreasing workload by giving more breaks. By doing so, governments can provide them with more time for spending with their families and friends and reducing the stress level. One further measure would be attracting youngs to participate in some entertaining events related to sports, arts, theatre, or music. These kind of events will trigger the sense of happiness and constructiveness in participants.
To conclude, it is indubitable that the problem of such complexity has no solution which can change the whole scnerey in a short period. However, I would agree that the measures outlined above would constitute a very satisfactory base for the subsequent positive stages to come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59409594096 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11680359861 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690036900369 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4478069359 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.066666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805979245162 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0231753573166 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356003880641 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0424006175885 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311796578097 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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