In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Essay topics:

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, technology developing, people creates a lot of new things such as smart phone, computer,... they can use free everything. I don't agree with this statement that in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

In my opinion, although technology developing, some people don't have their own smart phone or computer to read online because they don't have enough money to buy it like persons who have a low salary or student,... they can read printed newspapers or books to know what happened around them. Moreover, people who are old generation don't know how to use modern technology and they like to read printed newspapers and like real feel when they keep newspapers in hand. They also don't like to keep smart phone in hand every time, everyday. For example, my grandfather always like to read printed newspapers everyday.

On the other hand, if we use smart phone or modern technology everyday to read online, it will impact on our health and eyes. This is also reason why young generation now usually wear a glasses and have a problem about health like headache, bad health or sick. Besides that, using technology too much also impacts on our skin. It will make our skin bad and make us look like older. For example, scientists had a survey about problem of skin, and as the results, one of the problems of skin are that using smart phone or modern technology too much.

In conclusion, I disagree with this statement that in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online free.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...new things such as smart phone, computer,... they can use free everything. I dont ...
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Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ter,... they can use free everything. I dont agree with this statement that in the f...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ough technology developing, some people dont have their own smart phone or computer ...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...or computer to read online because they dont have enough money to buy it like person...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...persons who have a low salary or student,... they can read printed newspapers or b...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...Moreover, people who are old generation dont know how to use modern technology and t...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...they keep newspapers in hand. They also dont like to keep smart phone in hand every ...
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Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...to keep smart phone in hand every time, everyday. For example, my grandfather always lik...
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Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... always like to read printed newspapers everyday. On the other hand, if we use smart ...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...we use smart phone or modern technology everyday to read online, it will impact on our h...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reasoned'.
Suggestion: reasoned
...ct on our health and eyes. This is also reason why young generation now usually wear a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81403508772 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46674402813 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484210526316 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8982825649 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404319084245 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163382953418 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.231069598253 0.0667982634062 346% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.368820844015 0.151304729494 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.255736236246 0.056905535591 449% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.