Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Certain people believe that the best way to the nation ‘s general health is to build more sport centers. In the other hand, many people think that this solution is insufficient, they believe we must do other solutions. In my opinion, although investing in public gyms is the key solution, we still need to look for some additional approach to get better result.
The primary benefits of going to gyms are widely accepted and many doctors also recommend their patients to do physical excursive everyday by going to fitness centers to improve their body condition. As we can see, people in these days become more and more overweight and obesity bring many problems such as fat in blood, heart disease and stroke. By going to fitness centers frequency, it is not only help everyone to lose weight but also help us to avoid many healthy problems. In addition, people who are too thin and want to gain weight can practice with exercise machine every day is also the main measure to improve health. So, if we build more sport centers, it will provide more convenient conditions for people to do exercise.
Besides, many citizens are too busy to go to fitness center frequency, they can look for some other solutions to improve their body or if they want to combine other solutions with physical exercise to speed up the result. I think there is another solution to improve health is change the way we consume food every day. With recent advantage research on food, nutritionists recommend for us many heathy food to keep fit, functional food that also help us to improve health such as our sleep and reducing fat in blood or low carb meals can help us to gain muscle without gain fat our weight so I think we can launch campaign to build healthy life style.
In conclusion, I believe increasing the number of sports facilities is the best solution, but we should combine it with other approaches to get better result. In addition, nowadays people ‘s problems are diversity, so we also need many approaches for the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much heathy food', 'a good deal of heathy food'.
Suggestion: much heathy food; a good deal of heathy food
...on food, nutritionists recommend for us many heathy food to keep fit, functional food that also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, still, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75568181818 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44652915516 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491477272727 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6432559402 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.769230769 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176729648333 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760198194957 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559234584466 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128247806497 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490673892702 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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