Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to the completion of my Post graduation program. As you know I am working at your hospital as a part time employee, but now as I am done with my studies I am looking for a full time employment, and I would like to ask you to relieve me from my current position as a Jr. Embryologist.
First of all I am really grateful for giving me the opportunity to work at Indira IVF hospital. I wish I could continue my employment here itself, but I know that you already have 5 Embryologist and there is very little scope of growth for me in this hospital. So, because of this reason I would like to discontinue my service here and find opportunities with other organization.
The experience that I had gained at your hospital is really precious and it is going to reflect well with my further job.search. I loved working at this hospital and i have learn so many different techniques to perform various procedures. Apart from that, I really like the working environment, all the seniors were so co-operative and help me to gain expertise in the field of embryology.
As I have already started looking for full time jobs and had done few interviews as well. From which I am considering one of the organization to join, and they have asked me to join from next month. So I request to start my reliving procedure as, I will be able to provide my services till end of this month.
Thank you so much for the opportunities.
Yours, Sincerely
Jayraj Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in regards to the completion of my Post graduation pr...
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Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...know I am working at your hospital as a part time employee, but now as I am done with my ...
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Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...done with my studies I am looking for a full time employment, and I would like to ask you...
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Embryologist' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'embryologists'.
Suggestion: Embryologists
...elf, but I know that you already have 5 Embryologist and there is very little scope of growt...
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Line 6, column 174, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...ved working at this hospital and i have learn so many different techniques to perform...
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Line 6, column 183, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ng at this hospital and i have learn so many different techniques to perform various procedure...
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Line 6, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orm various procedures. Apart from that, I really like the working environment, a...
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Line 8, column 39, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... As I have already started looking for full time jobs and had done few interviews as wel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, well, apart from, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 272.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52941176471 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84466659341 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9499157441 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7692307692 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186376278651 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621624436029 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704518389922 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104273327533 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579194053712 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.