Some shops are open 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Do you think it is a good thing for the customers, shop staff and company as a whole?
The shops in any country will give great business. But in some countries, some shops open always 24X7 however, I partially agree with the given notion.
On one hand, The shop open and closing timings depends on many reasons firstly, the place where it is located? Based on the location of the shop the mangers can decide will be 24 x7 need to open or not for example in petrol bunks, in the airport, In the train station the business always on demand. Secondly, based on the items they are selling in the shops for example medicines, drinks are always on demand goods which are required for the people any time of the day.
On the other hand, the shop manager firstly needs to have a shift plan for the people who are working in high demand shops. For example, if the staff is less and they want the shop open for 24 hrs then the performance of the staff will be very low which may cause they will be tired and sleepy. Secondly, cleanliness of the shop if always customer is coming to shop the manager need to have a proper plan to clean and refill the stock. Furthermore, they need to check and replace the expired stock on time else they will get complaints from customers and may fall the customer count as well.
In conclusion, it’s the decision of the owner of the shop to restrict the shop open timings. Accordingly, he needs to manage all the resources to give good service to the public or customers.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'open'.
Suggestion: always open
...ness. But in some countries, some shops open always 24X7 however, I partially agree with th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43846153846 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23876550936 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.478417579 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.909090909 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308968947085 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122788424142 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548877044837 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18857191488 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226398030452 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'open'.
Suggestion: always open
...ness. But in some countries, some shops open always 24X7 however, I partially agree with th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43846153846 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23876550936 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.478417579 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.909090909 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308968947085 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122788424142 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548877044837 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18857191488 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226398030452 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.