Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Today technology has revolutionized our lives, teaching methods as well as influencing every sector in the world . Owing to this impact , certain tertiary educational institutions are providing various courses on the internet and enabling the students to study online. However, I believe that online courses are beneficial for the masses.
To commence with, studying online courses provides convinence to learners. There are some people who live in remote areas and unable to attend the colleges on regular basis, so this connects the individual from all over the world with different institutions where they can be taught by eminent mentors. For- example, thesedays, the corona virus is deleteriously affecting the life of masses, at the same time online studies has become a boon for continuing the studies of the pupils, which could be halted if institutions do not provide online courses. Therefore, ease of online courses enable youngsters to enroll and study regardless of their geographical location.
Moving further, enrollment in online courses is very economical and time saving. People who have financial constraints ,who cannot afford living to the hostels or any university accommodation, can take the benefit of studying online, because it totally reduce hostel and any other expanses of the person . For instance- reputed educational instuitions are available in certain metropolitian cities,moreover, there costs of living is extremely high that puts financial burden or sometime make the pupil unable to take admission. However , studying online saves the time of the person that can be utilized in other activities or in the enhancement of knowledge.
To conclude, it is clear that online studies are more advantageous for the students because it not only provides the opportunities to people of far off places to learn but also saves time and reduce the extravagances of the person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42905405405 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98235365665 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0485406517 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.916666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274095425921 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100418703028 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519706111248 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153333413224 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584493556889 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.