The graph and table below show the average monthly temperature and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The line graph illustrate the average monthly temperature, the table shows average hours of sunshine per year in three cities-London,New York and Sydney.
Overall,the temperature pattern in Sydney was different than that of London and New York. Sydney had the highest temperature at the beginning of the year which was above 25°C.New York experienced the lowest temperature which was below 5°C.At that time,the temperature in London was slightly higher than in New York around 10°C.After that,New York hit the peak point of below 30°C.London experienced the same trend during this period.Sydney experienced an increasing trend for temperature in which the temperature increased from above 15°C to touch the point of 25°C in December.
Based on the table,New York had the highest annual sunshine which was 2,535 while Sydney and London ranked second and third respectively with 2,473 and 1,180 hours of sunshine.
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- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperature and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 63
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- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities
- The graph and table below show the everage monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sunshine per year in three cities-London,New York and Sydney. Overall,the temperatu...
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...ies-London,New York and Sydney. Overall,the temperature pattern in Sydney was diffe...
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...erature pattern in Sydney was different than that of London and New York. Sydney had...
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...inning of the year which was above 25°C.New York experienced the lowest temperature...
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... lowest temperature which was below 5°C.At that time,the temperature in London was...
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...erature which was below 5°C.At that time,the temperature in London was slightly high...
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...tly higher than in New York around 10°C.After that,New York hit the peak point of bel...
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... than in New York around 10°C.After that,New York hit the peak point of below 30°C.L...
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...w York hit the peak point of below 30°C.London experienced the same trend during this ...
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...enced the same trend during this period.Sydney experienced an increasing trend for tem...
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...of 25°C in December. Based on the table,New York had the highest annual sunshine wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47887323944 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97306562699 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.848653166 43.030603864 365% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.5 112.824112599 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5 22.9334400587 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235939192132 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187101174522 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.220285863732 0.0843802449381 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235673118732 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.234794042993 0.0819641961636 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.2329268293 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.