some people think that capital punishment is an effective way to avoid serious crime.
do you agree or disagree?
There are some people suppose the death penalty is the best way to stop severe offence. In my opinion, I believe that it would be more effective method give to guilty person life imprisonment to avoid rude crime.
On the one hand every know and heard about situation when innocent people get punishment instead of who did for crime, so the capital punishment make the offenders feel fear before doing any kind of conceived atrocity, in the case of intruders, they had to be under the supervision day and night.
On the other side police officers should care about the people and take responsibility to their nation where they live, not only to their public but also wherever they could go.
In case the government should take part in investigations too, or they should support the security agencies in this inquiry with some different approaches.
There is any kind of disadvantages belonging to the serious crime is if security apprehend the offender and that person adjudged to die, it may be a mistake that person might be not a guilty and it would huge mistake of court in the case of quality Joe. That is why the capital punishment is not so effective and good way to solve the crime problems.
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars 61
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food 78
- 4 More and more people go on touring and travelling What are its advantages and disadvantages Give your own opinion 78
- Analysts tell us that many people today feel stressed and think they have insufficient control over their lives What problems do such feelings cause for people What remedies could you suggest 67
- One of consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 61
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...public but also wherever they could go. In case the government should take part ...
^^^
Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inquiry with some different approaches. There is any kind of disadvantages belon...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70142180095 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55657224303 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60663507109 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2114633602 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.714285714 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230267595367 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107990412691 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773112687969 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10833595797 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066939102045 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...public but also wherever they could go. In case the government should take part ...
^^^
Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inquiry with some different approaches. There is any kind of disadvantages belon...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70142180095 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55657224303 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60663507109 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2114633602 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.714285714 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230267595367 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107990412691 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773112687969 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10833595797 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066939102045 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.