In the past,most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are strating to work from home
People used to go to their work every day in ylthe past. But after rised use of smart technologies and the internet, most people are working at their home.
There are many advantages and disadvantages of this topic. I think it has more advantages. We can do more and more things work by using computers, smart phones and the internet
Firstly, we do not waste our time to take transport ( crowded road and public transport) while going to and coming from work. Also have enough time to rest while working. It has a good result, new ideas.
Secondly, you can spend your time with your family and this leads to the fact that family relations are good. In my opinion it is necessary in globalized world.
Thirdly, working from home decreased your expendeture for transport,dinner and others. As a result it helps you to solve some economical problems.
On the other hand, working from home has some disadvantages.
Firstly, people who works from home by using computers do not communicate with people. Consequently, these people do not socialized and communicative.
Secondly, if we work at home we will remain motionless. It raises some health problems ( extra weight, decresion seeing).
In conclusion, therefore there clearly advantages and disadvantages to working from home. Perhaps, the ideal arrangement would be to spend part of the working week in an office with colleagues, and part of the working week at home, with a certain amount of flexibility and comfort
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- In the past most people used to travel to their place of work With increased use of computers the internet and smart phones more and more prople are starting to work from home 56
- In the past most people used to travel to their place of work With increased use of computers the internet and smart phones more and more people are strating to work from home 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83632062754 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.330366365 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0555555556 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6111111111 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456141789082 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126490873862 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13308477798 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188221024288 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145768787678 0.056905535591 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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