In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might is be the case. Do you think this is a possitive or negative situation.
Shelter plays a very vital role in human society. Many people live in their own houses while some live in rental properties. It is believed by a lot of people in some countries that people should have their own home to live instead of living in rental homes. In my opinion, it is always better to have own house rather than rented one. In the following essay, the bases of my view will be discussed more in detail.
Although, rented houses are shelter for innumerable families across the globe but there are multiple challenges faced by the tenants. Firstly, the restrictions in the rented properties makes the stay uncomfortable. Restrictions on usage of water and electricity and not providing access to backyard or terrace are some of the actions making the tenant's stay unpleasant. For example, I lived in a rented property when I was a student, my landlord restricted my entry in the house after 10 AM and the water supply was limited as well.
On other hand, owning a property is not just a shelter it should be considered as a strong asset as well. To have your own house is also important as it may help you in financial aspects as well. A physical property like houses can be used to avail loan from banks to fulfill financial requirements. An individual can mortgage their property and ask for loan amount almost equal to their properties value. For example, my brother took an education loan from a bank for his higher studies by mortgaging his house.
To conclude, I believe that owning a property should always be more important than living at rented place because own house gives you a freedom to live in a way you want as well as it is a physical asset which gives you a financial stability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...iding access to backyard or terrace are some of the actions making the tenants stay unpleas...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
...ented place because own house gives you a freedom to live in a way you want as well as it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, so, well, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64473684211 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61613891556 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519736842105 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.951858867 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17970562554 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616370192661 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396205416582 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112023157085 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411711827892 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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