Throughout history, people have dreamed perfect society, but they have not agreed what an ideal society is.
What do you think the most important elements to have perfect society in modern world? How people can achieve an ideal society?
It is true that since the early history, human being has been pursuing the dream of an ideal society. The world had struggled in devastating wars using the name of shaping a better society. However, the opinions of that perfect world has not been the same, and therefore, different forms of societies have been applying in seperate parts of the world with different ideas about approaching to a perfect community. What factor is the most essential contribution to a prosperous world in which everyone is satisfactory? In the following essay, this will be elaborated and some measures as to how people can reach the dreaming society will be examined.
In the first place, it depends on particular period of time to define a perfect society. However, in the setting of a volatile market, and ever-changing technology, and unstable development in many regions of the world these days, in order to reach an enjoyable society, the social infrastructure is one of the most important elements for such a society. Under the wise leadership of governments, which are for people and due to people, an amused society must have established all facilitators to its citizens’ comfortableness. The available and convenient means of transportation, a fair housing agenda, an easy accessibility of healthcare services, education; an even workplace, or a good pension scheme for each and every citizen must be taken into account. These not only ensure its members to enjoy life without stress in the short run, but also guarantee the unshakable condition of living throughout people’s life. People would not derive a pleasure life unless they are free from being anxious about unemployment, homeless; nor fearing of having no food, no income to pay their bills and their children education. They then also could achieve their career, take a good care of their children and being content when they retire. What is more, the governments would be the ones work for people productively in order to make fair law, securing and protecting people’s rights. Take Scandinavian nations as typical examples. In the snowy land, people are relishing a high living standard, an unfluctuating pace of life, and free of stress circumstance of living and working.
To the second question of how this ideal society can be achieved, it is undeniable that this is going to be feasible. If the governments practiced good policies to abolish the gap between the rich and the poor, more money could be taken by federal governments to invest to infrastructure for the citizens’ use. Employing smart-headed people to make long term plans in every field of the society should be considered for guaranteeing the lastingness of the perfect community. The governments should encourage people to approach higher education by allocating the federal budget to free of charge university education, and scholarships to Master and PhD programs. Making full use of natural resources, researching and building renewable and environmentally friendly sources must be the national prerequisites to prevent it from economic crises, stabilizing the impeccable social condition achieved. Another idea is to educate people about the modern lifestyle and the concept of happiness to put everyone on the same page. It is necessary to mention that every citizen should be heard of by the respect from governments via their votes. It is also true to have an intergartion of this unflawed society in the global level, and the cooperation internationally would be a must on the process.
In conclusion, it is not dreaming to create an utterly perfectible society if the governments commit to accomplish such nations for their people. However, it is challenging to complete this ideal habitat in the moment. The question is, therefore, left to individuals to make their life more colorful by focus on their specific goals and the priority in particular periods of their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, as to, in conclusion, in particular, it is true, what is more, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 13.1623246493 251% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 93.0 41.998997996 221% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3286.0 1615.20841683 203% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 633.0 315.596192385 201% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19115323855 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01592376844 4.20363070211 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02180266574 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 320.0 176.041082164 182% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505529225908 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1032.3 506.74238477 204% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1559751327 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.384615385 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3461538462 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42307692308 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 8.67935871743 253% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308466746493 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779985194184 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625782114787 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193949006887 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627067102282 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 170.0 78.4519038076 217% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.