A peaceful society is a backbone of any country. Everyone wants to be a part of perfect society. However, they are still arguments for what could be an ideal society. I believe, there is a requirement of numerous elements which can lead to a faultless society which I will elaborate in the subsequent paragraphs along with the suggestions how people can participate to achieve it.
To commence with, the most prominent requirement for an ideal society is there should no racism on the basic of cast, race and creed. People should be free to practice any faith. They should not be categorized for their cast or skin color. Authorities should treat all indigenous with same eye and try to fulfill their requirements. To exemplify, according to report of United Nations, there are several examples of perfect societies in Europe which are considered an example for other nations because of same treatment for all the natives. Thus, non-biasness can lead to a better society where all citizens can live in harmony.
Further, it cannot be achieved without efforts from public side because they are the main entity of any society. People can take part in many ways. They should adapt the tolerant behavior and try to accept the shortcomings of other faith groups which will create harmony in the society and can make it an ideal for everyone.For instance, in India there is a unity in diversity and people from difference background living there with no troubles because they have respect for other creeds. Therefore, with tolerance behaviour and acceptance of the other faiths can make a model community.
In conclusion, as discussed above, equal treatment and rights can make an incomparable society and people should show same respect to other beliefs to maintain harmony. Governments should work towards to make such type of environment for individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06209150327 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76941648172 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532679738562 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.2368243003 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.642857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291643031287 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096770224157 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734767788129 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189835882955 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522180603069 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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