You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given bar graph represents the data regarding the percentage of people visiting the cinema halls in one of the European country on different days of a week in the years 2003, 2005 and 2007.
Overall, the majority of people went to cinemas at the weekends (Saturday and Sunday) in the given period while the amount of visitors on weekdays was less.
Now turning to the details, most of the people prefer to watch cinema on Saturday and Sunday. However, the percentage of people watching cinema on Saturday is much higher than other weekdays. In 2003, 2005, and 2007 more than 40% of people visited cinema while 30 to 35 percent of people watched cinema on Sunday.
In contrast to the weekends, other weekdays have recorded less number of cinema watchers. Apart from Saturday and Sunday, Friday has the maximum visiting rate, in all three years 2003, 2005 , and 2007 exactly 30% people visited cinemas. As regards the other days of a week, the share of cinema visitors was noticed less than 25%.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-10-21 | linhdk35 | 78 | view |
| 2024-10-04 | brew | 67 | view |
| 2023-06-24 | Ánh Kim | 78 | view |
| 2022-10-19 | Johndavisvu | 67 | view |
| 2022-03-18 | ESSEYWRITER | 78 | view |
- Writing Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The charts show the amount and quality of water supplied to two regions of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Y 56
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants Why do you think people waste food What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away 56
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You shou 67
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The diagram shows the production of circuit boards Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words 61
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You shou 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ting rate, in all three years 2003, 2005 , and 2007 exactly 30% people visited cin...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, while, apart from, as regards, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80346820809 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26168958832 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537572254335 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5085817092 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151163123573 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777208314752 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593690219375 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109168215301 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695258463731 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.