You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?
In the recent times the food wastage issue has increased dramatically. The food bought by restaurants and shops is wasted a lot by many people. This essay will discuss why this is happening and put forward several solutions for the issue.
There could be several reasons why the people are wasting the food. Firstly, the kind of deals offered by shops and restaurants make people buy excessive amount food; the offers like combo meals and buy 1 get 1 free looks cheaper to the buyers. Since, the consumers find these kind of deals pocket friendly, unknowingly they buy extra food which is thrown away in most of the cases. For example, in my college days, me and my friends use to have pizza from a restaurant frequently but so many times we wasted it as we bought large pizzas to avail the offer.
To reduce the wastage of food, an awareness campaign should be organized. Although, from the childhood itself everyone is taught about the importance of food still there are many people are wasting the food as they don't understand its value. An awareness campaign conducted throughout the country can encourage people to save food. A poster representing the data of food wastage and also showing the hard work of a farmer to grow a crop should be pasted at the restaurants and shops. For example, there is a board in the cafeteria of my college where the amount of food wasted by students in a day is displayed everyday. That board embarrassed students a lot and encouraged them to save food.
To summaries, the reason behind food wastage is buying extra amount of food to avail some discount from the shop or restaurant and in my opinion this problem could be solved if people understand how valuable food is for their existence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...o the buyers. Since, the consumers find these kind of deals pocket friendly, unknowingly t...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
..., in my college days, me and my friends use to have pizza from a restaurant frequen...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...any people are wasting the food as they dont understand its value. An awareness camp...
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Line 5, column 612, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...asted by students in a day is displayed everyday. That board embarrassed students a lot ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, still, as to, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72039473684 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52099691937 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532894736842 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4123486318 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431902807371 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166768366881 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864750740783 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274373479177 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402805148125 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.