Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed What is the reason for doing this Is this a negative or positive development.
The competitiveness in the world is increasing day by day. People are putting many efforts so that they do not fall victim to this cut-throat environment. As parents have to go through too much pressure, they are often deprived of fulfilling their dreams; they do not want their children to face a similar situation. Somehow, they end pressurizing their pupils, vulnerable to their upbringing.
Parents always want their children to succeed in their lives; they sacrifice their lives to get the best education and learnings from society. Sometimes, the anxious parents turn out pressurizing their kids, which can result in stress in children. Even parents comparing grades with other pupils is disquieting. Furthermore, compelling children to fulfil their dreams, making them study away from home, without the child's will is also stressful for this young age. Maybe these are the reasons why children get into awful things, as they cannot handle their parent's pressure.
Nevertheless, some children are notorious in character. If the parents are lenient, children might get into a troublesome situation. Moreover, children these days spend a lot of their time in front screen: television, mobiles, computer, for entertainment purpose and get an addiction to it, leading to couch potato. In such similar situations, parents need to motivate them to play outside with other children to get better in other skills. Study shows, a sedentary lifestyle is directly proportional to the intelligence of the child.
To sum up, parents should induce their children as per their capabilities and likings. Often pressuring can hinder their capabilities; instead, proper motivation and guidance can help their children to nurture better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42379182156 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87447386827 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613382899628 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3862859214 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323971913811 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101146424919 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561390605567 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196003702793 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593383370146 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.