Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than the previous generation.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Teenage is one of the most vulnerable phases of our life. This is a time when kids start learning new skills at school and also develop good habits at an early age. In the past, students used to spend more time outside of their classrooms and also outside of their houses, which as a consequence, reduce the stress level in them compared to the children have nowadays. The main reasons behind it are the school schedule and competition between young ones. I shall discuss my view with relevant examples and state my opinion in the coming paragraph.
In this contemporary and highly competitive era, every parent acquires their kids to score high at school and accomplish a good job after finishing their studies. Because of it, teenagers have to choose many subjects in their course curriculum and start preparing for them at the beginning of the semester. AS we all know that, childhood age is a stage where we have to spend time outside of books and spend it with family and friends. The busy schedule at the institute made students work hard regardless of thinking their extra curriculum activities such as sports classes, and art classes. Nowadays, primary and secondary school kids spend most of their time for study which was totally contradictory in the past. A busy study schedule made kids feel stressed and divert them to bad habits such as the use of drugs, smoking cigarette. Bookish knowledge, for the instance, captivated students from outdoor activities.
In addition, a highly competitive society made offspring work hard to get batter a score at school as we are living in a global village. Currently, we are not competing with the person who is living next door, but we have with the person who is living at another end of the earth. However, in this hectic and busy bookish life students ended up depressed from the overburden of study, and pressure from their parents and relatives. The other mammoth reason for the competition is an escalation of the population all over the world. From the USA magazine published in 2019, it statemented that the overall population was almost half of our current one 50 years ago.
To put it in a nutshell, undoubtedly, the current teen youth are facing a huge amount of stress as compared to kids had in the past. There is some solution we could use to resolve it and make a better society for the next generation to live life happily and with a reduced burden on them. I, personally, could not resist the highly competitive market we have in this recent scenario.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, as to, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79405034325 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58195171594 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517162471396 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1292544438 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.85 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128003146588 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369346005006 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326096298935 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866772422546 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320433115831 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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