Write about the following topic:
The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is undeniable that our immune system is crucial to face any illness and keep our bodies healthy. However, the discovery of new deadly diseases probably can break through those barriers. Therefore, I strongly agree with the idea that people's health is prone to worsen in the upcoming years than before.
First of all, misusage of all kinds of medicines and drugs lead to weakening immunity to sickness. Somebody can look for false information and misguided prescriptions on the internet. Following those faulty instructions will damage our health and exposed us to the illness. For instance, using antibiotics without guidance from pharmacists can thin the immunity from viruses because they cannot kill them completely. Moreover, viruses can evolve to oppose antibiotics. Hence, it is vital to use our medicines accurately and listen to doctors' consultancy before applying any substances into our bodies.
Secondly, the world has found new diseases recently, and no cures have been confirmed. Furthermore, patients with background disease are highly targeted by unknown viruses. One of the recent pandemic, SARS-COVID-2, infects millions of people worldwide, and vaccinations are still underway to reach the patients. Consequently, the casualties increase daily, governments order lockdown and bring economic fall along with it. It is undeniable that the world has become more vulnerable than ever, and people can rapidly get infected, and eventually, our health cannot withstand the viruses. Therefore, a healthy and protective lifestyle contributes to a body with strong immunity to protect oneself from deadly illnesses.
In conclusion, people's health dramatically weakened if they continue to use medicine without guidance. Moreover, undiscovered diseases from viruses and bacteria are fatal threats to humankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cteria are fatal threats to humankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7326007326 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92351755196 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655677655678 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.897344256 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.0588235294 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116194425627 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345995925359 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323542311774 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719732421138 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114013080221 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.