Some people believe that natural ability is necessary to be successful at sports others believe that hard work and practice is more important discuss both sides and opinion
Sports, undeniably, has become a integual part of human life. It is often debatable topic that a few segment of globe believes that to achieve goals in sports, inborn abilities is must whilst other think that it is only possible by our own efforts. I sincerely assert that, given latter facet have much brighter sides as contrast to former one.
Shedding light on the prominent reason, that inborn ability is must to achieve goals in life, however, geans from parents are the main cause to the development of individual's body. It is noticed that, offsprings always grow according to their heredity from their progenerators. Although, if parents are already in sports field, then people can easily noticed everything, on the other side of mirror, if new person wants to join on now a bout then certainly it is difficult task for the individual. To illustrate, people who live in South are mastermind in studies as well, consequently it is easy to crack any exam for them. Similarly, its all depend on Pro generators about the capabilities or development of their children.
Father demonstrating the key features, a few segment of society argue that hard work and practice are play inextricable role in every person's life. The main reason for this facet is that never give up, I conquer that if individual is not able to achieve their outcomes, so they have to practice to the moon and the bag and do hard work are constant practice for particular sport, it leads to and great success in their life. Despite from this, if people not belong to sports blood relations, still they can achieve better results for their efforts if they never give up on leave their task in between. For instance, in hurdle game, there are multifarious hurdles in between but if we pass out that all hurdles we will certainly, achieve glowing results.
Having analysed the whole scenario, it can be concluded that both the facets are highly advantages. However I concur that, by doing hard work or practice are much pros as contrast to natural abilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Sports, undeniably, has become a integual part of human life. It is ofte...
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Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun segment seems to be countable; consider using: 'few segments'.
Suggestion: few segments
...ife. It is often debatable topic that a few segment of globe believes that to achieve goals...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...rominent reason, that inborn ability is must to achieve goals in life, however, geans f...
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Line 3, column 637, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... to crack any exam for them. Similarly, its all depend on Pro generators about the ...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun segment seems to be countable; consider using: 'few segments'.
Suggestion: few segments
...ather demonstrating the key features, a few segment of society argue that hard work and pra...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ice are play inextricable role in every persons life. The main reason for this facet is...
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Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...pite from this, if people not belong to sports blood relations, still they can achieve...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... both the facets are highly advantages. However I concur that, by doing hard work or pr...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...hat, by doing hard work or practice are much pros as contrast to natural abilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, similarly, so, still, then, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8591954023 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61972374567 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580459770115 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6432174372 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.785714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173325655533 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511964703049 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455838122775 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102594051583 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307948807813 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.