Different people influence our lives in different ways. How? Illustrate your answer with specific
examples.
We are surrounded by many people that have some meaning in our lives. Along with our family, we spend considerable part of our time at work with our co-workers and supervisor. Also, if we have significant other we are initiated to that person. Those people influence our lives in numerous ways and I will explain why in the following essay.
First to begin with, when we are adolescents we are not perfectly ready for the real situation in live and often our family stays behind us. They espouse us when we have to make imperative decisions or have to overcome obstacles. With their help and support we are inclined to make a right choice and learn how to act in the future. Moreover, we are protected from failures or other dire consequences that might occur if parents or other family members don't influence on us. No one can deny that is part of our live education and learning, because family members are most important people in our lives and they will never choose something bad to us. For example, when I took after some of my dad's habits like washing the car in a specific way I felt doing it so easy. If my dad hadn't influenced on me, I would have met many difficulties washing the car following my own pattern.
Moreover, people can influence our lives in other way when we are with our love one. When fell in love people are prone to do many things in order to be with the person they love. Some are so taken away and are afraid to take a decision without their partner's approve. Their quandary lead to an influence from their love ones. I will never forget my friend's steady girlfriend when she was choosing pullover and jeans for him at a shopping center. She might have not chosen the best clothes, he couldn't neglect her opinion though.
Lastly, we are definitely influenced at work from our supervisor. As a leader, he expect us to follow every desire he has and to work according to his system. We might not agree with some ideas or assignments, however it is compulsory to do it at the way our supervisor want. There are some cases in which we learn and blotter from our boss, cause we consider the actions as a useful and educational.
In conclusion, I believe that people influence in many ways depending on what role they have in our lives. Family members play an important role in our youth when we hesitate or can't take a decision by ourselves, cause we are not mature yet. Later, when in love we listen carefully to our husband or wife and take a decisions as we take their opinions in account, because we don't want to disappoint that person. Plus, we are influenced by our boss at work when we do things based on his system or way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a specific way" with adverb for "specific"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... of my dads habits like washing the car in a specific way I felt doing it so easy. If my dad hadn...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ther way when we are with our love one. When fell in love people are prone to do man...
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Suggestion: expects
...rk from our supervisor. As a leader, he expect us to follow every desire he has and to...
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Suggestion: a decision; decisions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46406570842 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45301423112 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474332648871 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5936749999 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.96 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.48 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.56 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19740132888 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734986976014 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730471039185 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138427416682 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394409524828 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.