It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television and a fridge do disadvantages of the development for society outweigh the advantage?
It is stated that people tend to have an automotive, TV, and a refrigerator.
In my belief, I think that the benefits of these materials can open the door for serious issues for society in the long run compared to any advantage it might bring.
Admittedly, there are some basic benefits of these things, they make human’s life smoother and due to this reason people want to purchase. The refrigerator can store food for a long duration and also helps to prevent food from contamination. The benefits of the car are nevertheless then others it gives comfort in the travel as well as its symbol of status also makes life easier in daily existence as well as people don't need to rely on other transportation for their work and these are the elements that encourage people to have a car. Interestingly, television has been an all-time favorite for people mainly because it gives entertainment and information in the comfort of home, people spend more time with family while watching together on television also broaden their knowledge by utilizing services like news and history channels.
Nevertheless, despite the advantages above, I believe all these possessions bring more drawbacks in the long run than they provide benefits in the present. Emission of carbon from the car is very dangerous for people with disabilities, children, and those who are suffering from various heart diseases. Moreover, refrigerators can bring obesity at a very early age by eating frozen food which is stored and consumed at a very large scale mainly due to the influence from Western countries job culture where people store food for a long time so that they can have their food anytime without having to make any preparation. Although cars make people lazier and it can lead to several health problems as well as maintenance of cars are so expensive that some people can't afford it, they end up by selling it or some Other valuable things only to pay for the maintenance and loan of it.
To conclude, having these materials isn't bad if people don't rely on them completely, and use them appropriately where it is needed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, while, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91620111732 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75111163201 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550279329609 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.6421140113 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.0 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5454545455 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148865295265 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597166060327 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278589852526 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838837773469 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362019938816 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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