It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television, fridge, do disadvantage of this development for society of outweigh
It is generally accepted that people desire to have some several materialistic things in their life such as car television, and refrigerator to make life more comfortable and easy although these types of products are useful for people so in my opinion in the long run it's benefits eclipsed its limitations.
To begin with, there are some merits to having these fundamental facilities such as car, fridge, and also Tv in life. The first is that they improve the standard of living and more convenient and for the easy Lifestyle. For example, a car all people can travel comfortably and as per convenient on their place easy to transport from one place to another and also helpful during emergencies. In addition to this, the perishable food products can be preserved in the refrigerator for a long time and thus avoid wastage and also benefits for the people. Apart from this television a great source of news and entertainment and also improved knowledge, for instance, some discovery Channel, geography channel and also the person has to feel isolated so they watched Tv and feel better.
On the other side despite the above-mentioned advantages , they have some problems so they can not be neglected. A major problem is created environmental pollution which is caused by toxic emissions and automobiles because it escaped from the car which produces carbon monoxide and increases air pollution that's why the ozone layer is depleting and emits UV rays and affects human life such as cancer, skin problems, and some respiratory disease, for example, bronchitis, upper respiratory tract infections, and pulmonary embolism for inhalation of polluted air.
In conclusion, all the information and example unnecessary use of the modern generation can be an adverse effect on the environment and human life and community, so my opinion dereliction of Tv, a car and fridge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e despite the above-mentioned advantages , they have some problems so they can not...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...on monoxide and increases air pollution thats why the ozone layer is depleting and em...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, thus, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10784313725 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93492030133 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.907483502 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.666666667 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 7.06120827912 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134708313191 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595361015406 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210515706646 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738031462762 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397835918162 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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