This is a fact that in today’s contemporary era most of the small businesses are being merged into large companies. According to my point of view, this trend has considerable draw sides that are more than its benefits.
On the one hand, As I mentioned above the replacement of small businesses into big companies has several demerits so now I am going to discuss those drawbacks. As per my perception, this phenomenon brings two main disadvantages. Firstly, merging micro-enterprises into macro businesses leads to unemployment as some people earn their bread and butter by running businesses such as sole entrepreneurship, partnership etcetera; however, if large enterprises would use small businesses for their benefit and takeover small firms then sole traders would lose their jobs. Moreover, they may not only become jobless but also discourage people to come into the business line. Secondly, another demerit is that people would forget the things which have provided by their ancestors in inheritance. For an instance, in India people used to run many tiny businesses by hand to earn money such as “Khadi” in which people wove the fibre by hands with the help of hands and sold to people. Whereas, now this replaced by machines and today’s generation love to wear clothes that are made of silk instead of “Khaddar”.
On the other hand, along with drawbacks this trend has done merits for the people. First of all, despite of providing jobs to the people, investors of small businesses face some problems as they could not complete with large businesses due to lack of resources. Therefore, this is better to sell businesses to macro companies and get money to open any other enterprise which might provide more benefits than old one. In addition to this, in this fast paced world no one prefers hand made things and everyone love to buy goods made by famous brands. Most importantly, nowadays people focus more on standard of living so they tends to buy products with high quality, comfortability as well as which raises their status in society.
To conclude, although takeovers of small enterprises by big organizations prove beneficial in some situations yet I believe that it’s disadvantages outweigh its advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14754098361 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9155604434 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584699453552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0815234636 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.6 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244255624429 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799763718445 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621103412781 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151021538516 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283134348662 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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