People often argued that students should have a permanent teacher during their school period, while others think that changing teachers annually is more essential to the students. I believe that schools should provide different teaching styles of teachers for students.
It is believed that having the same teacher can build a strong relationship between children and teacher and they can know each other deeply. As they are face to face everyday, teachers become a model role to influence those students in the educational field. It is beneficial for students, if they are familiar with the same person and the teaching style, so they can easily understand the lesson. Therefore, students feel more comfortable with the same teacher during the school time.
On the other hand, changing new teachers every year is a positive development for students. It is important that students can learn to adopt different teaching styles and personalities. It can help them in the future workplace because they used to cope up with different situations. Different teachers each year which mean diversity professionals. Every teacher has their major profession in certain subjects, such as science, lecterture, geographic. Students can absorb different knowledge each year from their new teacher. I believe this is a beneficial trend and many schools have already operated for several years.
In conclusion, although many students feel comfortable with the same teacher, it is essential that students can learn to cope with different teaching and personalities.
- An increasing number of children are overweight which could result in many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs Why do you think so many children are overweight What could be done to solve this problem 61
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including uses for food and research 67
- Children should always follow their parents' advice. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- Many historic buildings are being destroyed or replaced What are the reasons for this What should be done to preserve these buildings 61
- Some people prefer to relax by doing physical activities while others choose mental activities crosswords and chess etc Discuss both the views and given your opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... other deeply. As they are face to face everyday, teachers become a model role to influe...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47302904564 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79337258351 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51867219917 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3117617275 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35402130809 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138047409638 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078840068195 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224857426808 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063367586114 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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